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Task 2 Essay · advantages disadvantages

More and more people are choosing to study abroad for their university degree. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Today many people . They go to another country for university. I think it has . But thing is more big. , is very . Because . is very important nowdays. , they can get job. Also, they can make many foreign friends. It is very fun. They play together and learn culture. Second, abroad is very expensive. . Parents give a lot of money to . Also, . They miss mother and father. Sometime they cry. Food is not same, so they can not eat well. It is very hard time for . , . Advantage is learn language and make friend. and sad. But I think advantage outweigh disadvantage because is most important for future.
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Examiner feedback

What to improve
  • Task AchievementYour response is 159 words. Aim for at least 250 to fully develop your ideas and avoid an under-length penalty.
  • Task AchievementExpand on your ideas with more detailed explanations and examples.
  • Coherence & CohesionUse more varied linking words to improve the flow of your essay.
  • Grammatical RangeWork on subject-verb agreement and sentence structure for clarity.
What you did well
  • Lexical ResourceYou used some relevant vocabulary related to studying abroad.