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IELTS Writing samples

Model answers across every band, from 6 to 9. See how a well-structured response reads — with the exact cohesion, vocabulary, and grammar that earns each score.

11 samples

7band
Task 1 Letter · semi formal letter

A colleague from another department is going to visit your city for a few days on a business trip. He/she has asked you for some suggestions. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter: - recommend a good place for him/her to stay - suggest some things he/she could do in the evenings - offer to help during the visit

Dear Mr Reynolds, Thank you for your email. I was pleased to hear that you will be visiting our city next month, and I am more than happy to give you a few suggestions to make your stay comfortable. Regarding accommodation, I…

8.5band
Task 1 Letter · semi formal letter

There are some problems in the flat you are renting that need to be repaired, and you want your landlord to arrange the repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: - describe the problems - explain how they are affecting you - say what you would like the landlord to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,

Dear Mrs Halloran, I hope you are keeping well. I am writing about two maintenance issues at 42 Birch Lane that have worsened noticeably over the past fortnight and now require professional attention. The first concerns the bathroom ceiling, where a damp…

6.5band
Task 1 Letter · formal letter

You recently bought a piece of electronic equipment from a shop, but it stopped working after only a few days. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter: - explain what you bought and when - describe the problem with the item - say what you would like the manager to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about a product which I bought from your shop last week. I hope you can help me to solve this problem quickly. On 10th July, I purchased a wireless speaker from your branch…

8band
Task 1 Letter · formal letter

You are applying for a new job, and the company has asked you to provide a reference from a previous employer. Write a letter to your former manager. In your letter: - remind them who you are and when you worked for them - describe the job you are applying for - explain why their reference would be valuable Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,

Dear Ms Calloway, I hope this letter finds you well. You may remember me as the marketing assistant who worked in your team at Brightline Media between 2021 and 2024, before relocating to Manchester. I am writing to ask whether you would…

7.5band
Task 1 Letter · informal letter

You recently moved to a new house, and a friend gave up their whole weekend to help you with the move. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank them for their help - explain how things have gone since the move - invite them to visit you in your new home Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,

Dear Tomas, I've finally unpacked the last box, so it's about time I wrote to thank you properly for everything you did during the move. Honestly, I don't know how I would have managed without you. Giving up your entire weekend was…

7band
Task 1 Letter · formal letter

You saw an advertisement for a part-time position at a local bookshop and you would like to apply. Write a letter to the manager of the bookshop. In your letter: - say which job you are applying for and how you found out about it - describe your relevant experience and skills - explain why you want to work there Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,

Dear Mr Whitfield, I am writing to apply for the part-time sales assistant position at Riverside Books, which I saw advertised in the shop window last Saturday. I am currently a second-year literature student at Carlton University, and I believe this role…

7band
Task 1 Letter · semi formal letter

Your neighbour, whom you do not know well, has been making a lot of noise late at night, and this is causing you difficulties. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: - explain the situation - describe how the noise affects you - suggest a solution Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,

Dear Mr Okafor, I hope this letter finds you well. We have not spoken much since you moved into the flat above mine in April, but I wanted to write about a problem that has been affecting me recently. Over the past…

6.5band
Task 1 Letter · informal letter

A music festival is going to take place in your town next month, and you would like a friend who lives in another city to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - give details about the festival - explain why you think your friend would enjoy it - suggest arrangements for their visit Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,

Dear Marta, How are you? I hope everything is going well with your new job. I'm writing because I have some exciting news and an invitation for you! Next month, from 14 to 16 August, our town is holding a big music…

8band
Task 1 Letter · formal letter

You attended a training course organised by your employer, but you felt that it did not meet your expectations. Write a letter to the training company. In your letter: - give details about the course you attended - explain why you were not satisfied with it - suggest what the company should do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with a professional development course that I recently attended, and which unfortunately fell well short of what had been advertised. The course in question was the two-day "Advanced Project Management" workshop,…

6band
Task 1 Letter · formal letter

You recently bought an electric kettle from an online store, but it stopped working soon after it arrived. Write a letter to the customer service manager. In your letter: - describe the product you bought and when you bought it - explain what the problem is - say what you would like the company to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to complain about a electric kettle which I bought from your online store. I bought the kettle on 2 July from your website and it arrived after three days. At first the kettle…

7.5band
Task 1 Letter · informal letter

You have decided to move to a new city for a new job. A close friend lives in that city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - tell your friend about your new job - explain why you have decided to move - ask for your friend's help with finding somewhere to live

Hi Emma, I've got some exciting news to share with you, and honestly you're one of the first people I wanted to tell. I've just accepted a new job in Bristol, and I'll be moving there at the end of next month!…