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IELTS Writing samples

Model answers across every band, from 6 to 9. See how a well-structured response reads — with the exact cohesion, vocabulary, and grammar that earns each score.

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4.5band
Task 2 · opinion

Some people believe that governments should invest more in public transport than in building new roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, traffic is very big problem. Many people say government should spend money public transport not new road. I am agree this opinion. First, public transport is very cheap. If we take bus or subway, we save many money. Also, public transport…

4.5band
Task 2 · advantages disadvantages

More and more people are choosing to study abroad for their university degree. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Today many people choosing study abroad. They go to another country for university. I think it has good thing and bad thing. But good thing is more big. First of all, study in other country is very good. Because student can learn…

6.5band
Task 1 Academic · bar chart

The bar chart below shows the number of international students enrolled in three subjects (Engineering, Business, and Medicine) at a university between 2015 and 2023. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates how many international students studied Engineering, Business, and Medicine in one university from 2015 to 2023. Overall, it is clear that the number of students in Engineering increased strongly and became the most popular subject. On the other…

8.5band
Task 1 Academic · process

The diagram below illustrates the process by which recycled paper is produced from used paper. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The flowchart illustrates the step-by-step process of how waste paper is transformed into usable recycled paper. Overall, the paper recycling process is a continuous, multi-stage operation that can be broadly divided into three main phases: the initial collection and sorting of waste…

7.5band
Task 2 · general

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Education plays a central role in shaping how societies develop over time. In my opinion, schools should teach practical life skills alongside academic subjects because both are necessary for success. Firstly, academic knowledge builds the foundation for professional careers, and it trains…

8.5band
Task 2 · opinion

Some employers no longer require university degrees and instead focus on skills and experience. Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years, a growing number of companies have dropped the requirement for a university degree and now hire based on demonstrated skills and practical experience. I believe this is largely a positive development, although it carries certain risks that should be…

8.5band
Task 2 · two part

In many households, family members no longer eat meals together regularly. Why is this happening? What effects does this have on families and society?

The shared family meal, once the fixed point around which domestic life revolved, has become a rarity in many modern households. This essay contends that the decline is a by-product of contemporary working patterns and personal technology, and that its consequences, for…

8band
Task 2 · opinion

Some people think that the widespread use of smartphones has damaged the quality of communication between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a common perception that smartphones, despite connecting us more than ever before, have actually weakened the quality of human communication. While I acknowledge that these devices can be distracting, I largely disagree with the claim that they have degraded the…

8band
Task 1 Academic · process

The diagram below shows the process by which olive oil is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how olive oil is manufactured, from the harvesting of the fruit to the bottling of the finished product. Overall, the process consists of eight main stages and combines mechanical and natural techniques. Broadly speaking, the olives are first prepared…

7band
Task 2 · discussion

Some parents believe that educating children at home is best for their development, while others think it is important for children to attend school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Whether children should be educated at home or in a traditional school has become a topic of debate among parents. While homeschooling offers certain advantages, I believe attending school is generally more beneficial for a child's overall development. Those who support homeschooling…

7band
Task 1 Letter · semi formal letter

A colleague from another department is going to visit your city for a few days on a business trip. He/she has asked you for some suggestions. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter: - recommend a good place for him/her to stay - suggest some things he/she could do in the evenings - offer to help during the visit

Dear Mr Reynolds, Thank you for your email. I was pleased to hear that you will be visiting our city next month, and I am more than happy to give you a few suggestions to make your stay comfortable. Regarding accommodation, I…

6.5band
Task 2 · two part

An increasing number of people are choosing to buy second-hand goods such as clothes and furniture rather than new items. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years, buying second-hand products has become increasingly popular, and many people now prefer used clothes, furniture and electronics instead of new ones. This essay will explain why this trend is happening and argue that it is mainly a positive development.…

8.5band
Task 1 Letter · semi formal letter

There are some problems in the flat you are renting that need to be repaired, and you want your landlord to arrange the repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: - describe the problems - explain how they are affecting you - say what you would like the landlord to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,

Dear Mrs Halloran, I hope you are keeping well. I am writing about two maintenance issues at 42 Birch Lane that have worsened noticeably over the past fortnight and now require professional attention. The first concerns the bathroom ceiling, where a damp…

8band
Task 2 · opinion

Some people believe that the growing use of artificial intelligence in the workplace will do more harm than good. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Artificial intelligence is rapidly moving from science fiction into everyday working life, drafting documents, screening job applicants and even diagnosing illnesses. Some fear that this shift will ultimately damage more than it improves. I disagree with this pessimistic view: although the risks…

7.5band
Task 1 Academic · map chart

The maps below show the seaside town of Marlow Bay in 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps depict the coastal town of Marlow Bay as it was in 1990 and how it appeared in 2020, following considerable development. Overall, the town was transformed from a quiet fishing settlement into a tourist destination, with most of the…

7.5band
Task 2 · problem solution

Rates of obesity and diet-related illness are rising rapidly in many developed countries. What do you think are the reasons for this trend, and what could be done to address it?

Over the past few decades, developed nations have witnessed an alarming rise in obesity and related conditions such as diabetes and heart disease. This essay will examine the principal factors behind this trend and propose some realistic ways of tackling it. Several…

7band
Task 2 · opinion

Some people think that all advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertising is everywhere in modern life, and a growing share of it is designed specifically for children. In my opinion, banning such advertising entirely would be too extreme, but strict regulations are certainly necessary, particularly for products that harm children's health. The…

6.5band
Task 2 · advantages disadvantages

Nowadays, many people earn money from short-term jobs and freelance work found through apps and websites, instead of having a permanent job with one employer. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

In recent years, more and more people are earning money from short-term jobs through apps and websites, such as delivering food or driving passengers, instead of working permanently for one company. This trend, which is known as the gig economy, has both…

6.5band
Task 1 Letter · formal letter

You recently bought a piece of electronic equipment from a shop, but it stopped working after only a few days. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter: - explain what you bought and when - describe the problem with the item - say what you would like the manager to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about a product which I bought from your shop last week. I hope you can help me to solve this problem quickly. On 10th July, I purchased a wireless speaker from your branch…

8band
Task 2 · discussion

Some people believe that cash will soon disappear and be replaced entirely by digital payments, while others think physical money will always be necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

As smartphones and contactless cards become ubiquitous, many predict that physical currency will soon become obsolete, while others insist that cash will always retain a place in society. This essay will examine both perspectives before arguing that, although digital payments will dominate,…