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IELTS Writing samples

Model answers across every band, from 6 to 9. See how a well-structured response reads — with the exact cohesion, vocabulary, and grammar that earns each score.

8 samples

8.5band
Task 1 Academic · process

The diagram below illustrates the process by which recycled paper is produced from used paper. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The flowchart illustrates the step-by-step process of how waste paper is transformed into usable recycled paper. Overall, the paper recycling process is a continuous, multi-stage operation that can be broadly divided into three main phases: the initial collection and sorting of waste…

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Task 2 · opinion

Some employers no longer require university degrees and instead focus on skills and experience. Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years, a growing number of companies have dropped the requirement for a university degree and now hire based on demonstrated skills and practical experience. I believe this is largely a positive development, although it carries certain risks that should be…

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Task 2 · two part

In many households, family members no longer eat meals together regularly. Why is this happening? What effects does this have on families and society?

The shared family meal, once the fixed point around which domestic life revolved, has become a rarity in many modern households. This essay contends that the decline is a by-product of contemporary working patterns and personal technology, and that its consequences, for…

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Task 1 Letter · semi formal letter

There are some problems in the flat you are renting that need to be repaired, and you want your landlord to arrange the repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: - describe the problems - explain how they are affecting you - say what you would like the landlord to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,

Dear Mrs Halloran, I hope you are keeping well. I am writing about two maintenance issues at 42 Birch Lane that have worsened noticeably over the past fortnight and now require professional attention. The first concerns the bathroom ceiling, where a damp…

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Task 2 · discussion

Some people argue that scientific research should be driven mainly by the pursuit of knowledge, regardless of its practical applications, while others believe it should focus primarily on solving concrete problems facing society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Few debates within the scientific community are as enduring as the question of what should motivate research. One camp contends that inquiry ought to be guided purely by curiosity and the pursuit of knowledge, irrespective of any immediate use, while another insists…

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Task 2 · opinion

As cities grow larger and land becomes more expensive, some people argue that providing public parks and green spaces should remain a priority for city planners. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As cities absorb ever more of the world's population, planners face constant pressure to build housing, roads and commercial space on every available plot. Against this backdrop, some argue that parks and other green areas should be treated as a luxury the…

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Task 1 Academic · bar chart

The bar chart below shows the average number of hours per week spent on unpaid domestic work by men and women in six countries in 2023. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compares the weekly hours that men and women devoted to unpaid household work in six countries in 2023. The most striking feature is that women performed more domestic work than men in every country surveyed, although the size of…

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Task 2 · discussion

Some people think that admission to university should be based on entrance examinations, while others believe students should be selected on the basis of their school performance and other achievements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

How universities should select their students is a question with far-reaching consequences, both for individuals and for society. Some maintain that a single competitive entrance examination is the fairest gatekeeper, while others contend that a broader assessment of school grades, extracurricular involvement…