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IELTS Writing samples

Model answers across every band, from 6 to 9. See how a well-structured response reads — with the exact cohesion, vocabulary, and grammar that earns each score.

13 samples

6.5band
Task 1 Academic · bar chart

The bar chart below shows the number of international students enrolled in three subjects (Engineering, Business, and Medicine) at a university between 2015 and 2023. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates how many international students studied Engineering, Business, and Medicine in one university from 2015 to 2023. Overall, it is clear that the number of students in Engineering increased strongly and became the most popular subject. On the other…

6.5band
Task 2 · two part

An increasing number of people are choosing to buy second-hand goods such as clothes and furniture rather than new items. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years, buying second-hand products has become increasingly popular, and many people now prefer used clothes, furniture and electronics instead of new ones. This essay will explain why this trend is happening and argue that it is mainly a positive development.…

6.5band
Task 1 Letter · formal letter

You recently bought a piece of electronic equipment from a shop, but it stopped working after only a few days. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter: - explain what you bought and when - describe the problem with the item - say what you would like the manager to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about a product which I bought from your shop last week. I hope you can help me to solve this problem quickly. On 10th July, I purchased a wireless speaker from your branch…

6.5band
Task 2 · advantages disadvantages

Nowadays, many people earn money from short-term jobs and freelance work found through apps and websites, instead of having a permanent job with one employer. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

In recent years, more and more people are earning money from short-term jobs through apps and websites, such as delivering food or driving passengers, instead of working permanently for one company. This trend, which is known as the gig economy, has both…

6.5band
Task 2 · problem solution

Every year, a large amount of food is thrown away by households, shops and restaurants. Why does this happen? What can be done to reduce the amount of food that is wasted?

Food waste has become a serious issue around the world, with tons of food being thrown into the bin every day by families, supermarkets and restaurants. This essay will examine the main reasons behind this problem and propose several solutions. There are…

6.5band
Task 1 Academic · line chart

The line graph below shows the percentage of electricity generated from renewable sources in Germany, Spain and the United Kingdom between 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of electricity which was generated from renewable sources in Germany, Spain and the UK from 2000 to 2020. Overall, the percentage rose in all three countries during this period, with Germany showing the most dramatic growth.…

6.5band
Task 1 Academic · bar chart

The bar chart below shows the average number of hours per week that people in four age groups (under 18, 18-30, 31-50, and over 50) spent using three types of media (television, radio, and the internet) in a European country in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart gives information about how many hours per week four age groups spent on three kinds of media, which are television, radio and the internet, in a European country in 2022. Overall, it is clear that the internet was the…

6.5band
Task 2 · problem solution

In many cities around the world, traffic congestion is getting worse every year. What are the causes of this problem, and what measures can be taken to solve it?

Nowadays traffic congestion is a serious problem in many big cities. Every day people spend a lot of time on the road, and this situation is becoming worse. In this essay I will discuss the main causes and suggest some solutions. There…

6.5band
Task 2 · discussion

Some people believe that zoos play an important role in protecting wild animals, while others argue that keeping animals in cages is cruel and unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, there has been a debate about whether zoos are good for wild animals or not. Some people think zoos protect animals, but others believe that keeping animals in cages is cruel. This essay will discuss both views before giving…

6.5band
Task 1 Letter · informal letter

A music festival is going to take place in your town next month, and you would like a friend who lives in another city to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - give details about the festival - explain why you think your friend would enjoy it - suggest arrangements for their visit Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,

Dear Marta, How are you? I hope everything is going well with your new job. I'm writing because I have some exciting news and an invitation for you! Next month, from 14 to 16 August, our town is holding a big music…

6.5band
Task 2 · opinion

Some people believe that the minimum voting age should be lowered to 16. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, there is a debate about whether teenagers of 16 years old should be allowed to vote in national elections. Although young people today are better informed than in the past, I disagree with lowering the voting age, because I…

6.5band
Task 2 · discussion

Some people believe that working from home benefits both employees and companies, while others think it damages productivity and teamwork. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, working from home has become very common because of technology. Some people think it is good for workers and businesses, but other people believe it reduces productivity and team spirit. This essay will discuss both opinions and give my…

6.5band
Task 2 · opinion

Space exploration costs billions of dollars every year. Some people believe that this money would be better spent on solving problems here on Earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every year, governments spend billions of dollars on space programs, and many people argue that this money should be used for solving problems on our own planet instead. I mostly agree with this view, although I accept that space research brings some…