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Task 1 Academic · bar chart

The bar chart below shows the average number of hours per week that people in four age groups (under 18, 18-30, 31-50, and over 50) spent using three types of media (television, radio, and the internet) in a European country in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart gives information about how many per four age spent on three kinds of , which are , and the , in a European country in 2022. , it is clear that the was the most popular for younger people, while older people preferred . was not used much by any . Looking at the , the under 18 spent the most time on it, at around 25 per . The 18-30 was also high with about 22 . , the use dropped for the older , and people over 50 only used it for 6 a . showed the opposite trend. The over 50 for about 20 , which was the highest for this . The 31-50 around 15 , but the under 18 only 8 . For , all the age were similar and quite low. The numbers were between 3 and 7 per , and the over 50 listened a little more than the others. , young people liked the more, but old people liked , and was the least popular for everybody.
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