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IELTS Writing samples

Model answers across every band, from 6 to 9. See how a well-structured response reads — with the exact cohesion, vocabulary, and grammar that earns each score.

10 samples

7.5band
Task 2 · general

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Education plays a central role in shaping how societies develop over time. In my opinion, schools should teach practical life skills alongside academic subjects because both are necessary for success. Firstly, academic knowledge builds the foundation for professional careers, and it trains…

7.5band
Task 1 Academic · map chart

The maps below show the seaside town of Marlow Bay in 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps depict the coastal town of Marlow Bay as it was in 1990 and how it appeared in 2020, following considerable development. Overall, the town was transformed from a quiet fishing settlement into a tourist destination, with most of the…

7.5band
Task 2 · problem solution

Rates of obesity and diet-related illness are rising rapidly in many developed countries. What do you think are the reasons for this trend, and what could be done to address it?

Over the past few decades, developed nations have witnessed an alarming rise in obesity and related conditions such as diabetes and heart disease. This essay will examine the principal factors behind this trend and propose some realistic ways of tackling it. Several…

7.5band
Task 2 · discussion

Some people believe that living in a large city offers the best opportunities for a fulfilling life, while others feel that smaller towns and rural areas provide a higher quality of life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Where a person chooses to live can profoundly shape their career, relationships and overall wellbeing. While some maintain that large cities present the greatest opportunities for a rewarding life, others insist that smaller towns and the countryside offer a superior quality of…

7.5band
Task 1 Letter · informal letter

You recently moved to a new house, and a friend gave up their whole weekend to help you with the move. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank them for their help - explain how things have gone since the move - invite them to visit you in your new home Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,

Dear Tomas, I've finally unpacked the last box, so it's about time I wrote to thank you properly for everything you did during the move. Honestly, I don't know how I would have managed without you. Giving up your entire weekend was…

7.5band
Task 1 Academic · pie chart

The two pie charts below show the proportion of household expenditure by category in a country in 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts compare how households in a particular country divided their spending across six categories — housing, food, transport, healthcare, entertainment and other — in 1990 and 2020. Overall, while food and housing remained the two largest areas of expenditure…

7.5band
Task 2 · opinion

Some people argue that public libraries are no longer necessary because of the internet, and that governments should stop funding them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As information becomes increasingly available online, some people claim that public libraries have outlived their purpose and no longer deserve government funding. I strongly disagree with this view. Although the way people use libraries has changed, these institutions still perform social and…

7.5band
Task 2 · two part

In many parts of the world, young people are choosing to leave the countryside and live in big cities. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In many countries, villages are steadily emptying as their younger residents move to large cities. This essay will suggest that the trend stems from the concentration of opportunities in urban areas, and will argue that, on balance, it is a negative development…

7.5band
Task 2 · problem solution

In many cities, house prices and rents have risen so much that ordinary people can no longer afford to buy or rent a home. What problems does this cause, and what measures could governments take to deal with this situation?

In numerous major cities, the cost of buying or renting a home has climbed far beyond the reach of average earners. This trend creates serious social and economic difficulties, but there are several practical steps that governments could take to address it.…

7.5band
Task 1 Letter · informal letter

You have decided to move to a new city for a new job. A close friend lives in that city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - tell your friend about your new job - explain why you have decided to move - ask for your friend's help with finding somewhere to live

Hi Emma, I've got some exciting news to share with you, and honestly you're one of the first people I wanted to tell. I've just accepted a new job in Bristol, and I'll be moving there at the end of next month!…