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Task 1 Letter · semi formal letter

There are some problems in the flat you are renting that need to be repaired, and you want your landlord to arrange the repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: - describe the problems - explain how they are affecting you - say what you would like the landlord to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,

Dear Mrs Halloran, I hope you are keeping well. I am writing about two maintenance issues at 42 Birch Lane that have worsened noticeably over the past fortnight and now require professional attention. The first concerns the bathroom ceiling, where a damp patch has spread to roughly a metre across and begun to flake. I suspect the leak originates from the roof, as the stain darkens after heavy rain. The second is the boiler, which cuts out intermittently and takes several attempts to restart, leaving us without hot water at unpredictable times. Beyond the inconvenience, both problems are beginning to affect our daily life. My daughter's asthma has flared up since the damp appeared — her doctor believes the two may well be connected — and cold showers before work have become a miserable routine. I would be grateful if you could arrange for a roofer and a heating engineer to visit within the next week. I am generally home after 5 pm and happy to grant access at short notice, and I will gladly send photographs in the meantime should you find them useful. Thank you for your prompt attention to these matters. Kind regards, Owen Marsh
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Examiner feedback

What to improve
  • Grammatical RangeVary sentence structures further and proofread for minor grammar and article errors.
What you did well
  • Task AchievementThe response addresses all parts of the task and maintains a clear position throughout.
  • Coherence & CohesionIdeas are logically ordered with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
  • Lexical ResourceA good range of topic vocabulary is used with mostly accurate collocation.