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Task 2 Essay · opinion

Some people believe that governments should invest more in public transport than in building new roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, traffic is very big problem. Many people say . . First, is very cheap. If we take bus or subway, we save many . Also, is no traffic jam. Many car on the traffic jam. But subway go under ground, so it is very fast. need more subway for people. Second, . . . It air pollution. People sick because dirty air. So not new . New need very much too. If no , people not buy car. , is more better than new . It save and fast and clean. must invest to bus and train for future.
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Examiner feedback

What to improve
  • Task AchievementYour response is 142 words. Aim for at least 250 to fully develop your ideas and avoid an under-length penalty.
  • Task AchievementProvide more specific examples of how public transport benefits society.
  • Task AchievementClarify your stance with a stronger thesis statement.
  • Coherence & CohesionUse more linking words to improve the flow between ideas.
  • Grammatical RangeWork on using correct verb forms and subject-verb agreement.
What you did well
  • Lexical ResourceYou used some varied vocabulary related to transport and pollution.
  • Coherence & CohesionYour essay has a logical structure with clear main points.
  • Task AchievementYou addressed the prompt and presented a clear opinion.