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Task 1 Letter · formal letter
You are applying for a new job, and the company has asked you to provide a reference from a previous employer. Write a letter to your former manager. In your letter: - remind them who you are and when you worked for them - describe the job you are applying for - explain why their reference would be valuable Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,
Dear Ms Calloway,
I hope this letter finds you well. You may remember me as the marketing assistant who worked in your team at Brightline Media between 2021 and 2024, before relocating to Manchester.
I am writing to ask whether you would be willing to provide a professional reference for me. I have recently applied for the position of Marketing Coordinator at a healthcare charity called LifeBridge and have reached the final stage of their selection process. The role involves managing social media campaigns and coordinating fundraising events — responsibilities that closely mirror the work I did under your supervision.
Your reference would carry particular weight because you oversaw the two campaigns I am proudest of, including the product launch that exceeded its engagement targets by forty per cent. As the charity has specifically requested a referee who can comment on my project management skills, I can think of no one better placed than you.
If you are happy to help, the charity will contact you directly by email; of course, I would completely understand if your schedule does not allow it. Thank you very much for considering my request.
Yours sincerely,
Elena Petrova
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Examiner feedback
What to improve
- Grammatical RangeVary sentence structures further and proofread for minor grammar and article errors.
What you did well
- Task AchievementThe response addresses all parts of the task and maintains a clear position throughout.
- Coherence & CohesionIdeas are logically ordered with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
- Lexical ResourceA good range of topic vocabulary is used with mostly accurate collocation.