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Task 1 Letter · formal letter
You recently bought an electric kettle from an online store, but it stopped working soon after it arrived. Write a letter to the customer service manager. In your letter: - describe the product you bought and when you bought it - explain what the problem is - say what you would like the company to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about a electric kettle which I bought from your online store. I bought the kettle on 2 July from your website and it arrived after three days.
At first the kettle was working good, but after one week it start to have a problem. When I turn it on, the light comes on but the water does not get hot. I tried to use it many times but the problem is same. Also, the lid does not close properly, so I think the kettle has more than one problem.
I checked the guarantee paper and it says the product have one year guarantee. Because of this, I want you to change the kettle with a new one. If it is not possible to change it, please give my money back to my bank account.
I hope you can solve this problem quickly because I need kettle every day for making tea.
I am looking forward for your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Anita Sharma
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Examiner feedback
What to improve
- Grammatical RangeVary sentence structures further and proofread for minor grammar and article errors.
- Lexical ResourceReduce repetition by paraphrasing key terms with precise synonyms.
- Task AchievementDevelop each main idea with a more specific example to strengthen support.
What you did well
- Task AchievementThe response addresses all parts of the task and maintains a clear position throughout.