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Task 1 Letter · formal letter

You recently bought an electric kettle from an online store, but it stopped working soon after it arrived. Write a letter to the customer service manager. In your letter: - describe the product you bought and when you bought it - explain what the problem is - say what you would like the company to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to complain about a electric which I bought from your online store. I bought the on 2 July from your website and it arrived after three days. At first the was working good, but after one week it start to have a . When I turn it on, the light comes on but the water does not get hot. I tried to use it many times but the is same. Also, the lid does not close properly, so I think the has more than one . I checked the guarantee paper and it says the product have one year guarantee. , I want you to change the with a new one. If it is not possible to change it, please give my money back to my bank account. I hope you can solve this quickly because I need every day for making tea. I am looking forward for your reply. Yours faithfully, Anita Sharma
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Examiner feedback

What to improve
  • Grammatical RangeVary sentence structures further and proofread for minor grammar and article errors.
  • Lexical ResourceReduce repetition by paraphrasing key terms with precise synonyms.
  • Task AchievementDevelop each main idea with a more specific example to strengthen support.
What you did well
  • Task AchievementThe response addresses all parts of the task and maintains a clear position throughout.