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Task 2 Essay · opinion

Some people believe that online courses are a good alternative to traditional classroom education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people courses instead of going to a classroom. Some people think this is a good way of education. I agree with this opinion, but I also think classroom have some benefits that cannot give. , education is very convenient. can at home and they do not need to travel to school every day. This save a lot of time and money. , my cousin studied a marketing course on internet and she finished it while she was working full time job. If she went to a normal college, she could not do this. Also, courses are usually more cheap than normal universities, so more people can afford to . , there are many choices . A in a small city can a course from a famous university in other country. This was impossible in the past. , also have problems. cannot meet their teacher face to face, so when they have a question it is difficult to get answer quickly. , some feel lonely and they stop the course before finish it. In the classroom, can make friends and teacher can control them to hard. , I agree that courses are a good alternative for traditional education because it is convenient and cheap. But I think must be careful, because needs strong motivation, and not every have this motivation.
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