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Task 1 Academic · line chart

The line graph below shows the number of visitors (in millions) to three major museums in a city — the National Gallery, the Science Museum, and the History Museum — between 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates how many people, measured in , visited three major in a city — the , the and the — over a twenty-year period from 2000 to 2020. , all three experienced growth in visitor numbers across the period, the saw the most dramatic rise. By 2020, the two most popular attractions had swapped positions compared with the start. In 2000, the was the leading , welcoming roughly 3 visitors, followed by the at around 2.5 . The lagged behind with just 1 . Over the following decade, the grew steadily to about 4 by 2010, while the climbed at a similar pace. The most striking change occurred at the . Its figures increased sharply after 2010, overtaking the around 2014 and eventually reaching approximately 6 visitors in 2020, making it the busiest of the three. , the levelled off after 2010 and finished at around 4.5 , and the ended at just under 5 . , the that had once been least visited became the clear leader by the end of the period.
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Examiner feedback

What to improve
  • Grammatical RangeVary sentence structures further and proofread for minor grammar and article errors.
  • Lexical ResourceReduce repetition by paraphrasing key terms with precise synonyms.
What you did well
  • Task AchievementThe response addresses all parts of the task and maintains a clear position throughout.
  • Coherence & CohesionIdeas are logically ordered with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.