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IELTS Writing samples

Model answers across every band, from 6 to 9. See how a well-structured response reads — with the exact cohesion, vocabulary, and grammar that earns each score.

5 samples

6band
Task 2 · opinion

Some people think that governments should tax fast food in the same way as cigarettes and alcohol in order to reduce health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fast food is very popular in many countries and it cause many health problems like obesity and heart disease. Some people say government should put tax on fast food same like cigarettes and alcohol. I agree with this idea, because I think…

6band
Task 2 · opinion

Some people believe that online courses are a good alternative to traditional classroom education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people study online courses instead of going to a classroom. Some people think this is a good way of education. I agree with this opinion, but I also think classroom have some benefits that online cannot give. Firstly, online education…

6band
Task 2 · two part

In many countries, the number of babies being born is falling. Why is this happening? What effects does this have on society?

In many countries around the world, people are having less children than before. This essay will discuss the reasons of this trend and the effects it have on society. There are some reasons why people do not want to have many children.…

6band
Task 2 · problem solution

In many countries, young people find it difficult to get a job after they finish their education. What are the causes of this problem, and what measures can be taken to solve it?

Nowadays, many young people cannot find a job after they finish their study. This is a big problem in many countries. In this essay, I will discuss the causes of this problem and give some solutions. There are some causes of youth…

6band
Task 2 · opinion

Some people think that schools should teach children how to manage money as a school subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days many people believe that schools must teach children about money. I completely agree with this idea because money is very important in our life and children should learn it early. Firstly, a lot of young people do not know how…