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IELTS Writing samples

Model answers across every band, from 6 to 9. See how a well-structured response reads — with the exact cohesion, vocabulary, and grammar that earns each score.

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7band
Task 2 · opinion

Some people believe that employees who work from home are more productive than those who work in an office. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The shift towards working from home has become one of the most significant changes in modern employment. While some argue that remote employees achieve more than their office-based colleagues, I only partly agree: home working boosts productivity for certain people and tasks,…

6.5band
Task 2 · problem solution

Every year, a large amount of food is thrown away by households, shops and restaurants. Why does this happen? What can be done to reduce the amount of food that is wasted?

Food waste has become a serious issue around the world, with tons of food being thrown into the bin every day by families, supermarkets and restaurants. This essay will examine the main reasons behind this problem and propose several solutions. There are…

8band
Task 2 · two part

More and more people now get their news from the internet and social media rather than from newspapers or television. Why has this change taken place? Is it a positive or negative development?

Printed newspapers and scheduled television bulletins are rapidly losing ground to websites, apps and social media feeds as the public's main source of news. This shift has occurred, in my view, because digital platforms fit modern life far better than traditional media…

7band
Task 2 · advantages disadvantages

More and more students are choosing to study at universities in foreign countries rather than in their home country. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, a growing number of young people decide to pursue their higher education overseas instead of staying in their own country. While this choice brings certain drawbacks, I believe that the benefits are more significant. There are clear disadvantages to…

7band
Task 2 · two part

Fewer children are learning to play musical instruments nowadays. Why is this happening? How can children be encouraged to take up a musical instrument?

In many countries, the number of children who learn to play the piano, violin or other instruments is declining. This essay examines the main causes of this trend and suggests several ways in which young people could be encouraged to take up…

6band
Task 2 · opinion

Some people think that governments should tax fast food in the same way as cigarettes and alcohol in order to reduce health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fast food is very popular in many countries and it cause many health problems like obesity and heart disease. Some people say government should put tax on fast food same like cigarettes and alcohol. I agree with this idea, because I think…

8band
Task 2 · advantages disadvantages

Some car manufacturers are developing vehicles that can drive themselves without human control, and such cars may soon be common on our roads. Do the advantages of driverless cars outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully autonomous vehicles, once confined to science fiction, are now being tested on public roads and may become commonplace within a generation. While driverless technology promises remarkable gains in safety and accessibility, it also raises economic and ethical questions that society has…

7band
Task 2 · two part

Many young people today admire celebrities such as singers, actors and sports stars more than figures like scientists or politicians. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is increasingly common for teenagers to admire film stars, musicians and athletes instead of scientists, doctors or political leaders. In my view, this trend is largely driven by the media environment young people grow up in, and it is a negative…

7band
Task 2 · discussion

Some people think that the news media has become far too influential in modern society, while others argue that it plays an essential role in keeping the public informed. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The media is a powerful force in today's world, reaching millions of people every single day. While some argue that it has gained too much influence over society, others maintain that it performs a vital function by keeping citizens informed. This essay…

6band
Task 2 · opinion

Some people believe that online courses are a good alternative to traditional classroom education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people study online courses instead of going to a classroom. Some people think this is a good way of education. I agree with this opinion, but I also think classroom have some benefits that online cannot give. Firstly, online education…

8band
Task 2 · problem solution

An increasing number of people, particularly teenagers, spend many hours each day looking at the screens of their phones and other devices, and many find it difficult to stop. What problems does this cause, and how can they be addressed?

It has become normal for people, and adolescents in particular, to spend the greater part of their waking hours staring at a screen, often unable to put their devices down even when they want to. This compulsive habit damages both individual wellbeing…

7band
Task 2 · advantages disadvantages

International tourism has grown rapidly in recent decades, and some destinations now receive millions of visitors every year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this growth for the places that tourists visit?

Over the past few decades, international travel has become affordable for millions of people, and popular destinations now welcome enormous numbers of visitors each year. Although this growth brings considerable economic benefits to host communities, it also creates problems that should not…

7band
Task 2 · opinion

Some people believe that individuals can do little to protect the environment and that only governments and large companies can make a real difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that ordinary people have almost no power to protect the environment, and that meaningful change can only come from governments and big corporations. While I accept that these large bodies play a crucial role, I disagree with the…

6band
Task 2 · two part

In many countries, the number of babies being born is falling. Why is this happening? What effects does this have on society?

In many countries around the world, people are having less children than before. This essay will discuss the reasons of this trend and the effects it have on society. There are some reasons why people do not want to have many children.…

9band
Task 2 · opinion

In the modern world, it is no longer enough to complete one's education in early adulthood; people must continue learning throughout their lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The idea that education is a phase to be completed by one's early twenties, after which working life simply begins, is increasingly untenable. I entirely agree that continuous learning has become a necessity rather than an option, for reasons that are economic,…

9band
Task 2 · opinion

Some people believe that competition in society encourages people to achieve more, while others argue that cooperation is a more valuable quality to develop. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Whether human progress is driven more effectively by competition or by cooperation is a debate that touches education, work and society as a whole. Both instincts have shaped civilisation, and in my view the two are not opposing forces but complementary ones,…

7.5band
Task 2 · opinion

Some people argue that public libraries are no longer necessary because of the internet, and that governments should stop funding them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As information becomes increasingly available online, some people claim that public libraries have outlived their purpose and no longer deserve government funding. I strongly disagree with this view. Although the way people use libraries has changed, these institutions still perform social and…

6.5band
Task 2 · problem solution

In many cities around the world, traffic congestion is getting worse every year. What are the causes of this problem, and what measures can be taken to solve it?

Nowadays traffic congestion is a serious problem in many big cities. Every day people spend a lot of time on the road, and this situation is becoming worse. In this essay I will discuss the main causes and suggest some solutions. There…

6.5band
Task 2 · discussion

Some people believe that zoos play an important role in protecting wild animals, while others argue that keeping animals in cages is cruel and unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, there has been a debate about whether zoos are good for wild animals or not. Some people think zoos protect animals, but others believe that keeping animals in cages is cruel. This essay will discuss both views before giving…

6band
Task 2 · problem solution

In many countries, young people find it difficult to get a job after they finish their education. What are the causes of this problem, and what measures can be taken to solve it?

Nowadays, many young people cannot find a job after they finish their study. This is a big problem in many countries. In this essay, I will discuss the causes of this problem and give some solutions. There are some causes of youth…